Get a set of exec eyes or ears on the written or verbal pitch for your project.
- Writers may choose to have their 1-2 pg. written pitch or their 8-Min. verbal pitch (via phone or Skype) reviewed by the working professional of their choice.
- You will receive a personalized feedback report within 7 to 10 business days following the scheduled session.
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Pinpoint the heart of what makes your project worth buying in the first sentence, whether that's a tight story hook or a unique sales aspect.
Make sure the pitch highlights the central conflict of the story early on, whether it's internal or external.
The tone/vibe/voice of the pitch should match the tone/vibe/voice of the project - if it's a satire, the pitch should be satirical, if it's a thriller, the pitch should leave me dying to know what happens, etc.
The pitch should make clear where the project fits in the marketplace (indie film, streaming drama, etc) and who the audience is.
Don't compare to too many existing titles as it makes the pitch feel confused- this meets that is fine, not this meets this meets that meets this with a bit of that.
Don't say no one has ever done anything like this before or a similar sentiment, that's a double edged sword.
Don't rely too heavily on cast ideas - it's fine to include names as reference, but you don't want to give the impression your project could only work if a very short list of A-listers agreed to star.
Leave room for the person hearing the pitch to connect the dots to why the project is unique/marketable/castable etc. That's their job.
Procedurals and high-concept tv dramas with female leads. Romcom features and light serialized dramatic tv shows.
Westerns. Faith-based.
Jen Ray is co-founder of the production company LYLAS Pictures whose producing credits include Netflix's LIKE FATHER and Focus Features’ FOR A GOOD TIME, CALL… LYLAS is currently producing the adult animated comedy TANGLES for Monarch Media and has set up film and television projects with companies including Buzzfeed, Elevate Entertainment, Hello Sunshine, Lionsgate, The CW, Desert Whale, The Tannenbaum Company and Temple Hill.
Previously, Jen was a Literary Manager/Partner at Heroes & Villains Entertainment. Jen loves the development process and prides herself on adding value when working with writers, particularly on stories that center women's experiences.
Jen was amazing! She gave practical and actionable feedback while also highlighting elements she saw as strengths of the piece. We had an engaging and enjoyable conversation, and I can't wait to work with her again.
~ Celina Dobson, Screenwriter
This is the first time I've ever submitted anything for feedback, and I was absolutely thrilled with Jen's comments. She was very specific as to what she liked and what I could improve or change. It makes me feel good to know that someone liked my idea, even with criticisms.
~ Lisa Iannucci, Screenwriter
- Immediately after registering, you will receive an Order Confirmation email that serves as the receipt for your registration. In the Order Summary section of this email, you will find a link reading "CLICK HERE FOR INSTRUCTIONS" that will take you to instructions on how to submit your contact info or written pitch via the Material Submission Form.
- Your material/contact submission is due as soon as you are ready, but no later than 9:00am PT the day of the session.
- You will receive this exec's written feedback on your pitch via email within 7 to 10 business days following the session unless otherwise notified.
- Need some general guidelines on pitching? Check out our Hitchhiker's Guide to Pitching!
- Looking for some more intensive guidance on your pitch? Upgrade to Pitch Fitness Club!
Cancellation Policy
You may cancel for a full refund up to 72 hrs. prior to the start of the session. Cancellations requested after this deadline will be ineligible for refunds.
Questions?
If you have any questions at all about this program, email coordinator@roadmapwriters.com!