The exec of your choice will read either the first 25 pages of 4 scripts, 33 pages of 3 scripts, or the first 50 pages of 2 scripts. You'll also submit a one-pager of loglines (to include Title, Format, Genre, and Comps with each logline) for their review. Then you'll have a one-hour call with the exec to get their notes and feedback on your portfolio as a whole, as well as receive marketing and career advice. Be prepared to ask guiding questions!
Questions? Email terra@roadmapwriters.com
If you can't pitch your project in 1-3 sentences, you don't have a strong enough handle on what the hook of your concept is. Also, make sure you emphasize why you are the *best* writer to tell this particular story.
High concept TV shows and features with a splashy commercial hook. Lighthearted TV procedurals with a unique premise.
Low budget indie dramas, straight dramas, period dramas, anthology series.
Audrey Knox is a literary manager at Cartel, representing writers in film and television. Her clients have staffed on shows including REASONABLE DOUBT, SINGLE DRUNK FEMALE, P-VALLEY, GINNY & GEORGIA, GROWN-ISH, and THE UPSHAWS, and she has clients with comedy pilots set up at ABC and Broadway Video.
Audrey's feature clients have written ALICE, DARLING (Lionsgate, 2022), CRUSHED (Tubi, 2022), THE SANTA SUMMIT (Hallmark, 2023), and the SINGLE BLACK FEMALE franchise (Lifetime, 2022-present). She has writers working on assignments for Wayfarer, Mattel, DreamWorks Animation, and Marvel. Her client Buck Productions is developing pilots with Ryan Tedder (OneRepublic), Bobby Moynihan (SNL), and Joe Lo Truglio (BROOKLYN NINE-NINE).
Audrey worked her way up from Receptionist in 2016 to Manager in 2018.
Audrey was really helpful. The way she explained her feedback was so useful. I had heard similar notes about the structure of my pilots before but I never heard it explained as clearly and concrete as Audrey did. Even though I have to rework the structure of my four pilots, I feel like I now know how to fix the problem. I’m so glad I signed up for this consult and was able to connect with Audrey!
~ Darci Faye, Screenwriter
I cannot recommend Audrey enough - from moment one, she brought in a down to earth real-person demeanor, and then when we got into the work, her feedback was actionable, no-bullsh*t, and the real deal. She has a steady finger on the pulse of this industry & knows what works and what doesn't. I'm so grateful for the few sessions I've done with Audrey, all of which eventually led to a working relationship where she's now taking out some of my scripts for staffing & development opportunities!
~ Tristan J Shuler, TV Writer
Audrey is very straight-forward, blunt even. Not for everyone, but for my stubborn writer brain, it worked perfectly! She makes sure to start and end each session with positive aspects & compliments, and she's very helpful if you're actually open to hearing what she's saying. She's great at structure and even gives specific solutions to page problems to make the story an easier read. I would recommend Audrey to any writer who is serious about starting their career and is not easily defensive when getting notes about structure.
~ Anonymous Screenwriter
Audrey was really helpful. I've heard similar notes about my structure before, but I never heard it explained as clearly and concretely as Audrey did. I'm so glad I signed up for this session and was able to connect with Audrey!
~ Darci Faye, Screenwriter
After registering, you will receive instructions on how to submit your material in your order confirmation email. Please be sure to submit a one-pager of loglines and either 2 scripts (50 pages each), 3 scripts (33 pages each), or 4 scripts (25 pages each). After submitting your material, please allow 3-4 weeks to receive proposed times for scheduling your call with the exec.
Be sure to familiarize yourself with Roadmap's Code of Conduct.
Questions? Email terra@roadmapwriters.com
Cancellation Policy: You may cancel your registration for a refund or Roadmap gift card if you have not yet submitted your material for review. However, once your material has been received by Roadmap, your registration cannot be canceled. Having revised material or a desire to retroactively apply a discount or gift card code are not grounds for cancellation, refunds, or gift card credit. Once your material has been submitted, the only acceptable grounds for cancellation and a refund or gift card credit is an unforeseen, ongoing emergency on the part of either the writer or the exec resulting in more than 6 weeks without any scheduling update from the exec via direct contact or Roadmap, or a sudden change in the exec's ongoing availability. In the instance of an irreconcilable scheduling issue, the writer may still receive a written feedback report from the exec. In this case, the writer is not entitled to a refund or gift card credit as the exec has read the submitted material and provided written feedback in lieu of the call.